#title The Mirror #subtitle Sisyphus, The Tragedy of #author Comrade Candle #date 1/6/24 #source https://www.freesofiajohnson.com/the-mirror-sisyphus-the-tragedy-of/ #lang en #topics poetry, nihilism, absurdism, sisyphus, myth, tragedy *** INTRODUCTION TO SISYPHUS, THE MYTH OF A Greek tragic (anti-)hero, Sisyphus provided the French philosopher Albert Camus a classic illustration of the absurd in his essay, The Myth of Sisyphus. Speaking as a prisoner, a nihilist, and a lover of tragedy, I love Sisyphus. He was a professional highwayman, a trickster whose exploits inspired my writing of this epic — I too am a (former) robber. Among his feats, Sisyphus outsmarted Death by slipping him into chains. Imprisoned, Death was unable to claim any life and civilization collapsed. Sisyphus was eventually contained and sent to Hades, where he convinced Persephone to let him return to his wife — once again escaping the Underworld. When Hades finally collects the rogue man, Sisyphus is punished for a mortal life of thievery, of mocking the rules of the gods. He is sentenced to an eternal task: roll a boulder up a hill, only to have it fall ad infinitum. In his essay, Camus considers that “one must imagine Sisyphus happy.” He argues that one must find happiness in the accomplishment of the task, rather than in extracting the meaning from it. *** THE EPIC & THE TRAGEDY, A CRASH COURSE To the uninitiated, the epic may appear daunting. Long-form poetry is not as ever-present now as in the days when tragic comedies were written, memorized, acted, and recited to worship Apollo. Homeric epics, namely the Odyssey and the Iliad were written in strict dactylic hexameter, as was Virgil’s Aeneid. In poetics, meter denotes how many steps (a collection of syllables) are present per line, while “-ic” denotes the number of syllables per step and which syllables receive hard/soft emphasis. As I write in English (not ancient Greek nor Latin), I chose to compromise with iambic hexameter — one more step than Shakespearean iambic pentameter. In short, each line has twelve syllables (six steps), and every other syllable receives “emphasis.” I have strictly followed this structure. I have aimed to construct an enjoyable tragic hero. Time and victory are fleeting for Sisyphus, unless we adhere to Camus’s conclusion. For the ancient Greeks (prior to the Academy), the memorization of Homer constituted a mark of intelligence. Schooling involved learning to appropriately act or recite the epics. Hubris is integral to tragedy; through it the hero’s undoing becomes the poetic, impactful, and (at times) unjust resolution. *** SISYPHUS, THE TRAGEDY OF Free spirit, death defied, has freshened dawn become Lightened of torment forthcome as life’s due payment Fresh air’s breath expels cold sorrow frosting heart numb “Where shall I go prior death’s upset arraignment? Shall I just flee to see once more Apollo’s rise — Doubt that I have of ever knowing peaceful sight While defiance brings civilization’s demise” Joyous notes of hearty laughter provide respite “I would rather live as I so choose to exist Be damned what great risk I continue to garner! To fool Hades merely to cowardly subsist Would be wasteful of what great wit I have harbored” Sisyphus, our hero, has set his path onward Toward his old profession as an outlaw robber While below Hades’s chained calls have yet to be heard Regardless of intense frothing and much slobber “Challenge my rule today for all of your renown Surely you must expect my wrath will be unseen I will personally see to bring you back down So that you can understand what punishment means! Gods do not take kindly to being outsmarted Nor the shattering of the order we uphold” Soundless to Sisyphus who has just now started Ventures so fiery to demand one be bold Stepping over fencing surrounding lowly farm “Where can the brave find a dagger to make their own? Lying around servicing no potential harm Or even grasped by those who have yet to have shown Any propensity for culling expertise I will find my new blade wherever it may lie” Darting and weaving amongst sparsely present hay Concealed, but barely, leaving ample room to vie For farm’s existence as more than but dreary tease “The gods cannot hope to keep my weapon away I will certainly collect what my craft demands” Much rifling through that which is present outside Shows only the devotion of Sisyphus stands. “I see that, like every thief, you too have no pride Pilfering what little my farm and I possess I’d ask that you return what, of mine, you’ve taken Though it seems likely you’d need be under duress” Farmer with pitchfork, intended use forsaken Having grown weary of such useless dialogue A raising of the pitchfork serving as prologue Hardened muscles tightly grip a worn wooden shaft Stern and angry jobs accompanied by much bay That Sisyphus will leave the farmer’s possessions Protecting the homestead for yet another day Sisyphus in acting may appear at first daft In holding fast to his ground despite aggressions Yet farmer charges forward and Sisyphus dives Tumbling as struggle descends to grassy floor Spiteful of the cause for which Sisyphus still strives Farmer fervently fights as if he were at war Still, Sisyphus triumphs now — holding new weapon “You’d do well to deliver me a better blade I’ll be brief in telling you that which would happen: Without deliverance, your life is what you trade For this slight against my newfound time, here, on earth” Frightened mortally, measuring life beyond worth Much scuttling about gifts Sisyphus his wish Throwing pitchfork aside, a warning is issued: Sisyphus, magnanimous, is no lowly fish To be treated in ways that are petty and rude One should think of Poseidon to grasp what one meets When it is the hero Sisyphus who one greets! Apollo, having heard many cries, travels down Assuming the appearance of a rich merchant In the aim of halting one man’s insurrection He will wager to Sisyphus his laurel crown Through a carefully chosen skilled competition Sisyphus will truthfully learn if his penchant Lies among the gods rather than mere mortal men Ambitious ascent to godhood will not slacken Having placed himself between hero and Delphi Apollo awaits for the tides to finally crash Wanting for Sisyphus to at least have a try He refrains from trying to do anything brash As farm’s departure continues ongoing joy Sisyphus marauds on toward the nearest city Surprised yet thankful at spotting someone pretty He dashes out from bush to enact his swift ploy “I can see your riches are flagrantly displayed Truly a shame that your path and mine have now crossed For now all you own you can count to have been lost As an offering at my feet lest you be flayed” Rather than fold to a mortal’s dismal demand Apollo unsheathes a golden, glistening sword Now having revealed a good portion of his hand, He addresses Sisyphus of his own accord “I have an inkling of how the gods have been wronged Though I’m not here to discuss Hades’s present plight The weapon you wield would have been better if pronged And you’ll certainly regret that you forsook height I offer you my crown and my Olympus seat Should it prove possible that you can best my feat” Beckoning Sisyphus, Apollo heads to creek Pausing briefly at the edge yet not looking meek With only one thrust, he raises his sword, gleaming, Seven fish harpooned upon a blade, some steaming Yet Sisyphus pauses then with dagger, he jabs Only to find that with any subsequent stabs The results would be the same: only spearing three. So as Sisyphus turns in an attempt to flee He is seized by Apollo, dragged to Hades’s ask Given naught more to do than roll his big boulder Only to find as he ever completes his task The temperature in his heart grows colder.| CC *** LINE NOTES 1 | As the absurd subject, it naturally follows to label Sisyphus a free spirit (a term denoting its literal meaning, yet also “being a follower of Nietzsche’s teaching”). 3 | Punishment chills one’s heart, I notice as I look upon the prison. Fresh air is what we most live for, in here and out there. 4 | Couldn’t resist a playful use of “arraignment,” to this story as allegory. 5 | I could imagine Sisyphus, a patron deity of agéneios (beardless) man, begin Apollonian, also foreshadowing. 7 | Given naught can die, Sisyphus shattered society’s “truth” of death and taxes. Hades’s confinement birthed a new state. 9–12 | Sisyphus presents as the “subject in revolt,” a term I borrow from insurrectionist
theory — also, hubris. 17–22 | Hard not to image Disney’s Hades, try as I may. Still, Hades seems less of a “hothead” as I image him, more cold, more vindictive. 24–5 | Back in the day, peasant farmers were called on to become soldiers! So the demos (common people) were more “hard” and tough. Compare what Sisyphus does to a home invasion at some rural modern-day farm, he’d probably get shot. 30 | Fate was a staple of the Greek culture and thereby mythos. Sisyphus is certain of his fate — more hubris? Does he think himself capable of Apollonian feats? 34–5 | Certainly by now. Also, I use “craft” to stay true to the Greek techne. 38–41 | Total paradigm shift; also foreshadowing. 42 | Virgil’s epitaph read: Mantua me genuit; Calabri rapuere; tenet nunc Parthenope. Cecini pascua, rura, duces (Mantua gave birth to me, the Calabrians took me, now Naples holds me; I sang of pastures [the Eclogues], country [the Georgics], and leaders [the Aeneid]). 45 | Am I too Nietzschean? I am reminded that Sisyphus is about to surpass man during his downfall. 49 | Would we expect less? 54 | Another ode to Virgil. 56 | “Better” at what? 60 | As most do. 63 | Fish? 64 | Respect Sisyphus! 65 | Equal to the god? 67 | Back in the day, Apollo was “the shit,” having a hand in plenty of mythos. 70 | Not the first such wager Apollo can see the future after all. A warning should Apollo wish to gamble with you… 74 | Hubris rarely does. 75 | “Know thyself.” 81 | In ancient Greek, nobility, aristocrat, and wealth implied beauty, hence, “pretty.” 82 | Double-edged sword — notice a pacing change? Sometimes life comes at you fast. 84 | Hecate? 86 | “Offering.” 91-6 | Greek gods are known for being all-too-human. 97 | More of said humans. 98 | As if he knows already. 100–3 | For the fellow math nerds, that’s rate of change for you. 106–8 | Circular? Perhaps one day Sisyphus will escape his perpetual boulder rolling. Prometheus? **** RECOMMENDED READING Sophocles’ Antigone, as it features a woman hero. Camus’ The Myth of Sisyphus, for obvious reasons. Friedrich Nietzsche’s The Dionysian Vision of the World, to grasp my love for Apollo and to a degree, tragedy.